routine polishing

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Reed Esau
2014-01-18 16:42:42 -07:00
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@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ Words can also be weakened through overuse.
When using this dictionary, scrutinize each highlighted word or phrase, When using this dictionary, scrutinize each highlighted word or phrase,
asking whether it detracts from the point you are trying to make. asking whether it detracts from the point you are trying to make.
### Redundant and problematic phrases ### Redundant and problematic usage
``` ```
:WordyWordy :WordyWordy
@@ -117,6 +117,10 @@ if some of the guests have crashed your event. Or dialect differences can
erase redundancies, as the British will protest against where Americans erase redundancies, as the British will protest against where Americans
may simply protest. may simply protest.
See [50 Problem Words and Phrases][1] for more detail.
[1]: http://www.dailywritingtips.com/50-problem-words-and-phrases/
### Puffery and Jargonese ### Puffery and Jargonese
> “The man embodies _authenticity_; his _disruptive_ ideas on > “The man embodies _authenticity_; his _disruptive_ ideas on