routine polishing

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Reed Esau
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@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ Words can also be weakened through overuse.
When using this dictionary, scrutinize each highlighted word or phrase,
asking whether it detracts from the point you are trying to make.
### Redundant and problematic phrases
### Redundant and problematic usage
```
:WordyWordy
@@ -117,6 +117,10 @@ if some of the guests have crashed your event. Or dialect differences can
erase redundancies, as the British will protest against where Americans
may simply protest.
See [50 Problem Words and Phrases][1] for more detail.
[1]: http://www.dailywritingtips.com/50-problem-words-and-phrases/
### Puffery and Jargonese
> “The man embodies _authenticity_; his _disruptive_ ideas on