From a89115f16ee07eb90cfcb0ac8484c050eaccbc8a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Reed Esau Date: Sat, 18 Jan 2014 16:55:46 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] routine polishing --- README.markdown | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/README.markdown b/README.markdown index 2d6e1e3..3cb7050 100644 --- a/README.markdown +++ b/README.markdown @@ -30,8 +30,8 @@ checking. _wordy_ stands ready as a simple alternative to these comprehensive tools, focusing narrowly on identifying potential problems. To compensate for -_wordy_’s simplicity, it’s best used in concert with the literature on -usage (Strunk and White, e.g.). +_wordy_’s bare-bones approach, it’s best used in concert with the +literature on usage (Strunk and White, e.g.). ## Requirements @@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ enter the command: :LazyWordy ``` -Weak and lazy words common in first drafts. +Weak and lazy words are common in first drafts. We sabotage our writing though weak language, kicking the legs out from beneath our verbs and tearing at the foundations of our nouns, watering